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Human Heart

My soul becomes a battlefield,

A graveyard of dead emotions

A reservior of cold tears,

My rational mind scoffs at my human heart.
And my human heart cries because it is alone.

My mirror shows a parallel universe,
Where I am exactly who I want to be
And the world is perfect
And my human heart cries because it doesn't understand
But my rational mind gets it.

My careful non-conformity is just like everyone else's
And my human heart is buried just deep enough
To be safe, but unseen.
And my rational mind gaurds it,

Keeps it whole, keeps it hidden.

 

But the tears leak all over my human heart,

Bathing it in terrible sorrow

And my rational mind notices but stays silent

And my human heart freezes

But my rational mind has done it's job well

And this frozen block of ice in my chest remains

And taints the mirror with reality

But my tears are frozen

And my rational mind is in control.

 

And it leaves me static in a changing world.

 

 

 

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  • dragonsedge
    January 2
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    a pain well known


  • sunslave
    December 5, 2008
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    wow.

    vey dark and pretty


  • greyhaime silver member
    December 5, 2008
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    I meant to give you 3 applauds...

  • greyhaime silver member
    December 5, 2008

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    wow

    this is awesome hun,, I loved it. "taints the mirror with reality"... that is an awesome line... I hope all is well with you,,, you can bug me you know..

    Krystal


  • MYsecondchance
    December 5, 2008

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    i can kinda relate to this not this bad though,
    doing about the day but no being in complete control not really thinking about anything conscienously
    grat poem keep it up!
    take care

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