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Precipitate

Diamonds were sent from the sky,

Each one in formation holding the spectrum
like fire stolen from the gods
as they fled to Earth to be reborn in its crevices.

Clouds fell in a scene of tragedy

And painted the world in watercolor
after gray skies failed to maintain composure
and crash-landed to drown in their sorrows.

I stood alone in solace

Knowing that the sky is always falling
but the cycles cleanse the pallet
and allow the world to grow.

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  • 2lullabyhaven
    January 20
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    I Love It

    This poem dazzles my mind lots of love and good luck in the contest


  • Dragonbabyx3
    December 5, 2008
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    Beautiful, and real. The reality of rain you have right here. Its a beautiful write, and I love the lines" Clouds fell in a scene of tragedy

    And painted the world in watercolor
    after gray skies failed to maintain composure
    and crash-landed to drown in their sorrows."

    Beautiful! Thankyou for entering my contest and Good Luck!