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Disassociate

Just sink into the pain
Let the blackness fill me
A bit of sanity I can't regain
I'm driven to the edge
Acrid air to fill my lungs
Scared so bad I shake
Push in my eyes with my thumbs
Let it rain
So close to tears
So close to screaming
So close to all these things
I can't get close to anyone
Look at the monster inside
I know you see me through my eyes
And I'm still waiting for you to run
So as you try to dig deeper
I turn away
I try to turn away
I am trying to turn away
You give me a moment
But you are not letting me get as far away
As I can, as I let go, as I am inside

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  • hawkeslake gold member
    December 5, 2008
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  • hawkeslake gold member
    December 5, 2008

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    Such a sharp, painful description of separation inside, being overwhelmed by the pain for some inner aspect. The background is also impressive, it almost looks like shattered glass, shattering being the telling word... very well-crafted!