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Party for One




Simplistic thoughts capture wicked snickers
(always time for a bit of fun)!
promises of delight urge idle hands.

Company makes nightmares tolerable
while gasps escape through wonder-filled eyes;
imagination has always been my best friend.

Shifting reality breaks through pus
(honey tasting to dry lips)
drinking hungrily from dementia.

Stopping to smell putrid rot
as I walk through the doldrum days
remembering:

each daily experience
could turn into a massacre
with only me present
to witness the beauty




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My imagination is my best friend

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  • Selestial
    March 5

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    Beautifully Done

    It was your writings that inspired me to join this site. I am humbled by the visions you are able to send me via your words.


  • andywontdie silver member
    January 15

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    You Have No Idea, But I Do

    And mine too. Believe me, My imagination could end the world and bring back with only a blink of my eye. I'm not sure there are too many out there that could truely and honestly handled the raw unbridled content of my imagation in full force but thats ok, cause that thought makes me smile and giggle incessantly. Awesome, disturbing and quite a rapturous write. I enjoyed thoroughly.


  • tanzanite
    December 6, 2008

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    "each daily experience
    could turn into a massacre
    with only me present
    to witness the beauty"

    That was spectacular. I love your dark writes C. This was well penned.


  • Master Ktulu silver member
    December 5, 2008

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    I love to read what your imagination puts out here. It is always quite interesting. I would tell you what part is my favorite but it's already been mentioned twice before me...lol

    **Master Ktulu**


  • Corvus Corone
    December 5, 2008

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    a delicious best friend you have too hun. Good to read you again

    'drinking hungrily from dementia' simply awesome imagery.

    Nice, delightfully macabre pen

    Jem x


  • cricketjeff gold member
    December 5, 2008

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    Long time no see!
    Deep dark and worrying, thought provoking poetry, I am glad I live with my imagination and not yours!




  • Tattboy silver member
    December 5, 2008

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    Beautiful!

    "each daily experience
    could turn into a massacre
    with only me present
    to witness the beauty"

    But please don't go postal (he's not worth it!)


    • Tattboyspet
      December 5, 2008
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      lol - thanks
      if only it were JUST him though!
      i don't know how You can love me so much: i'm just a sick puppy
      love You MILLIONS!


  • Cerulean Sunrise gold member
    December 5, 2008
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    wicked snickers are better than a bag of jellybeans.

    nice.

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