Staring out the window on a rainy day
Not sure what's reflection, or what's reality
Looking at the world in a distorted way
Not sure what's reflection or what's reality
Seeing shapes and colors
Twist around themselves
Ideas are often garbled
Looking much like something else
Knowing that this vision
Can change so easily
Doesn't put my mind to rest
To help me fall asleep
Staring out the window on a rainy day
The glass reflects the images in a whole new way
Somethings like this can start to make your mind decay
When you're not sure what's reflection
Or what's reality.
Author notes
Just a poem/lyrics that I wrote one day... While staring out the window into the rain. Obviously. XD
A contest entry
- The Rain by Dragonbabyx3.
2399 points, ended December 23, 2008, 48 entries
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Comments
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I really enjoyed this. The way you related rain with your emotions of loneliness and all. A great write, best of luck.
~Noor
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This is interesting, gives a twist to the rain, almost like it is alive. I really enjoyed the second and third stanzas, they give body as well as spirit to the poem. Thankyou for entering my contest and Good Luck!
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