Sacrifices and laws
could not touch people's hearts,
So God's answer
was to send His Son.
A contest entry
- 2 of 3 rounds of Christmas contests by daviscth.
2000 points, ended December 8, 2008, 31 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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TRUTH!
Jesus was the ultimate sacrifice and the new Law! Your brevity speaks volumes.
Its' been a while since I stopped by to read your words dear friend. My apologies for the lapse in time. I hope you are well for I know you are blessed.
Always ♥
Renee
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this couldnt be more true! short, simple and to the point. you did a lovely job on this sentiment. I enjoy your work
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lena -
Beautiful poem, Vickie, sharing a beautiful truth; what sacrifice and the law could not do, Jesus did by His sacrificial death for us all. You really did an incredible job with this, as literally reams of material have been written, dealing with the subject, and you, in such very few words, summed the truth up so succinctly, without sacrificing any of the message. Wonderful job! Good luck in the contest!
Paula
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Wonderful! And his answer echos even unto this day.And our savior's presents too.
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He made the ultimate sacrifice.. and that I think, we are supposed to lead by example. The cost was great.. and I think this is something we need to keep in mind in our day to day lives.
Very nicely done!
Criss -
Absolutely perfect! Such a wonderful "answer" it was too. A merciful and loving "answer" Best, best to you in the contest.
Sam
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This is a wonderful sentence with your two words. Thanks for posting.
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