loosened ribbons release the rush
from the knot undone
by hands
i wish
were yours
A contest entry
- Shh - Don't tell anyone by Suzanne Dia.
3500 points, ended January 5, 28 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Congratulations!
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delicate words coming from
a burning heart....Ms. Dia
has her work cut out for her
in this contest.
Love, Lane
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how's life treatin ya?
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I love the way that you have formatted this so the ending is like a pointed sigh this is a sweet poem and it made me feel so full of longing! You have created such a beautiful sentiment in so few words, amazing
♦ M
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wow
{grin}
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Few words can sometimes speak louder than many words. Simplicity in all its beauty. Love and Peace.
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Shh
It's really good, but why are we whispering?
Joe
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Huge impact with few words - the title is so true...
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aww, this is so sweet!
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aww, and so are you
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this is really beautiful deb...
and so soft.
m
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thanks, mary..thought i'd better try, at least..that chop chop skeered me
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