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Through The Innocents Of The Child

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Christmas for a child from day one,
is bright sparkling lights and laughter and fun,
The one year christmas is one of toys and love,
not old enough yet but can't get enough.

Now he is two and trying to talk,
told of the Virgin Mary as they took a walk .
Visions he saw and the caroling displayed,
are memories in a childs head forever and a day.

Now he is five and within the church he sings,
of love and the blessings when one so believes.
He learns of baby Jesus and the virgin Mary displayed,
and from a childs mouth he asked that day.

Jesus was a baby just as I was,
and there were people around him just as me with so much love .
So does this make my mama a virgin and did the animals gather near,
and on that day silence broke out in the church when grandma told him yes my dear.

Oh the hush was so thick you could hear a pin drop,
and the preacher started to say "no son" but Grandma made him stop.
We are born from his blood are we not?
And a mother is the giver of life even today we havent forgot.
So who is to say otherwise to a boy of his blood,
and the church settled down for that was more than enough.

Author notes

I feel every child is a child of love born to this world with the ability to change the world for love if they are brought up to think it was to be

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  • BEAUTIFUL story Patty!!! I am so grateful that you post these wonderful writes. I have missed reading them.
    Love Mary


  • kooleyes
    January 21
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    this is outstanding. I love the way you paint the picture. Beautifully written my friend


  • Freed by Mercy silver member
    December 21, 2008

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    A delightful story resides in this poem. Congrats on winning Bronze!

    I think you mean "Innocence" in the title.


  • Violinstrings silver member
    December 14, 2008

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    great approach

    relating a child feelings of mary or parents teaching thier child of jesus
    i like your approach to mention mary and jesus

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