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Violence by any necessary means,
I want you to cut me,
Fuck me,
Drain me,
Explain me,
Define me,
Surround me,
All with my blood on your lips.

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  • hawkeslake gold member
    November 14
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    This is a difficult poem to read, because I keep wanting to say, "NO! Don't let anyone hurt you!" But to look at it as a poem, as words from the heart, as it is contructed to be read, well, I just have to take a step back. Your words are short and sharp, fitting the content, and each line cuts like a razor. The last line in particular is very powerful, and is a fitting counterpoint to your opening line. You write clearly, and with a passion that leaps off the page. I hope to read more by you. Lita