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Light to dark

Falling, fading
Turning into blackness
Changing, Creating
Light to Dark
I'm stronger now

A contest entry

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  • Exodus gold member
    December 20, 2008

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    Personally I would have put a line break before the last line, really make it a definitive ending to the piece. That said, I enjoyed this, a lovely take on the prompt.

    Thanks,
    F


  • McRae by nature
    December 4, 2008
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    Very powerful and amazing. Hope it does well in the contest.

    Carrie