- dedicated to my closest friend and soulmate
NIGGAZ ROLL AND NIGGAZ DIE
BUT MY BABY JESUS...
YOU BROUGHT A TEAR TO MY EYE.
I KNO U WANT ME TO DRY MY EYES
BUT I WISH I COULD HAVE GAVE YOU ONE LAST KISS GOODBYE.
ILL LOVE YOU FOREVER MY NUMBER ONE MAN..
BUT I GUESS THIS IS JUST HOW GOD HAS IT PLANNED.
SO NOW IM STICKEN MY MIDDLE FINGERS IN THE AIR,
YELLING FUKK THE WORLD CAUSE I NO LONGER CARE!!!
DIDNT YOU REALIZE YOU WERE MY HEART AND ALL MY LOVE??
WHY DID YOU HAVE TO BE SUCH A THUG??
HE TOOK MY SOUL WHEN HE TOOK YOUR LIFE,
WHY DID U HAVE TO BE PARTYIN THAT NIGHT???
I COULD GO ON FOREVER ON HOW MUCHED YOU WILL BE MISSED,
BUT FOR NOW I LEAVE YOU MY HEART.......
AND THIS POETIC KISS.
-REST IN PARADISE JESUS MY LOVE
-LOLLY CANAS
Author notes
I PUT MY WHOLE HEART IN IT FOR MY SOULMATE THAT WAS SHOT I HOPE WHOEVER IS READING IT LIKES IT
A contest entry
- please spare little time... by PrabhuDayal Khattar.
400 points, ended December 6, 2008, 17 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - *~!~*LOTS OF OPTIONS!!! Love-Sad-Happy- Rhyme COME SEE*~!~* by Shannon62875.
500 points, ended December 29, 2008, 9 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - PREWRITE!!!!! by darkscorpia.
640 points, ended May 19, 131 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
WHAT DO U THINK
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I like it, but I think it would read better not in all caps.
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WOW!!!Thats a very hearfelt write... I can tell you are hurting and im really sorry for your loss... keep up the grea twork and good luck in my contest!
Shannon*Leah
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welcome to allpoetry
This has a lot of heart in it, I'm so sorry for your loss. Good write.
♥
Shawna
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Humm..I really like it..and sorry for the lose ..it is really a heartfelt piece you sent for this contest..thanks for sharing..
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