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i thought i saw you once.

he says you can't get off
on defeat
but, i don't know
i think you might be into that
dress you up in girly clothes
something you aren't used to
but, i'm sure, would love to try
make you say dirty words
something you swear you've never said
and judging by her dedication
i assume you were the 'man'
you cave under pressure of my mystisism
and found an interesting rhythm in my sway
you got off on my dominant attitude
because i was the first one to understand
you thought you could open up
but, your inside is crude and worthless
a pathetic boy under your shell
just tormented with desire
to be called out for who you are
you may have changed their lives
but, you never rocked my world
just a frightened creature
who thought it was okay to come out
your inside is disgusting
and you'll lie to yourself forever
pretend you weren't exposed
but underneath your innocent smile
i'll always know it's you

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  • mind of a dreamer
    December 5, 2008

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    WOW this gave me cold shiver! I'm not even joking, all I have to say is welcome back my pretty girl! keep them coming because now I can sleep nothing things are starting to fit right back in place! WOW you make me proud!


  • ArrowCobain
    December 5, 2008
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    way to go, flowers. you make me proud