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~ The Simple Things I Cherish ~

A genuine effortless smile from your beautiful face,
comforting place in your warmest embrace
and a world where I'll live forever in your vast space,
this is all that I ask of you.
A call while you're faraway from home
just to tell me how much 'Tis you miss me.
A beautiful red rose, bottle of wine
and a lovely card that reads, 'you're mine'.
My endless love I do not ask much,
all that I need is your gentle touch.
Please, take back your pearls and fancy cars,
I do not need them nor the bright sparkling stars.
There's no reason to change all your true colours,
I love you just the way that you are.
All that I ask of you is very simple:
open the doors and wait for me to walk through,
be my bestfriend and a good father to our kids.
Tell me a bedtime story, reassure me of your love
plant a warm kiss on my forehead, hold me for a lifetime in your arms
and watch me slowly drift away lost in your tidal charms.

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  • Lonely
    December 5, 2008
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    I totally love the show of deepest emotions in this poem.. The rhyming scheme was really good to, flow was smooth.. I loved it a lot. Simple Things. I think thats all that a woman wants from her man, really.
    I loved your poem. Thank you for adding me in your friends list, tho you didnt read anything of mine yet.

    Peace,
    Lonely