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Dagger

Examination leaves assurance
Whispers stab my heart
Illumination reveals deception
Duplicity her art

A contest entry

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  • Exodus gold member
    December 19, 2008
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    Oh wow, this was lovely. I love the difference between the background and the content of the poem. Personally I think is would have gone with "Duplicity is art", more because then you don't get that feeling that words have been missed out. Either way a stunning piece.

    Thanks,
    F

  • NonSense - 2PhLi
    December 4, 2008
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    THis is hott!


  • McRae by nature
    December 4, 2008

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    I love the last line, what a powerful statement. Hope this does really well in the contest

    Carrie