Sweet dreams and fairy tales
wishes that come true
summer nights and northern lights
make me think of you
Apple blossoms swirling down
in a gentle breeze
Little Princess, I love you
so much more than these
Life can be so hard sometimes
Pain and bitter trials
They are all forgotten when
My little Princess smiles
You mean more than life to me
A rare and priceless pearl
And you will forever stay
Your Daddy's little girl
Sunday picnics at the park
Meadows in the spring
Humming birds and rhyming words
Children when they sing
Sunrise o'er a mountain top
Sunset on the seas
Little Princess, I love you
So much more than these
Author notes
For my daughter Tori.
A contest entry
- Write About Your Kids in rhyme by piccola.
900 points, ended December 8, 2008, 10 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Anything by Stormy Days.
1750 points, ended February 1, 86 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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aww very cute makes sense you sure do love your daughter a wonder rhyme congrats on the trophy i can see why you got it wonderful
~GOOD LUCK~ -
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It was beautiful, my friend.
I never thought to ask in some of our more long in depth conversations if you had any kids, so I guess I just figured you didn't. Shows where assuming gets us doesn't it?
Anyway, I love the rhyming pattern, and the flow as well
Oh, and this one totally diserves a gold trophy
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Ooooh! How gorgeous is this?!
This is indeed a classic!
Love it, love it, love it! What a wonderful thing to create for your daughter ~ she is very lucky.
BRAVO dear Poet! BRAVO! Congratulations on the Gold too ~ truly deserving.
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Very Nice
I have four daughters and they all make me feel this way. I am as proud of them as you obviously are of yours! Now I have six granddaughters and they are a handful...of love! Great poem! The Shaker
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<3. Gold all over it. Great stuff.
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Awwww this pulls at the heartstrings. I hope she has or gets a copy of it. It's one of those things that needs to be framed and on her bedroom wall or in a frame on her dresser. Someday when she's going through albums and stuff .... it will make her cry. It's a gem.
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and your daughter is so blessed to have a daddy such as you...
a wonderful delightful write as always...
thank you for the read tonight.
's at your feet too.
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