Silence maybe golden
But time is eternally ticking
Tocking
Seconds always passing
Life led by supreme design
One Smooth transition
To our far reaching fluid future
Numerals too numerous to mention
And me
Always late for the date
~~~
Author notes
My inspiration, the wrist watch which I rarely wear, which could be why I'm the worst time keeper ever!
Word bank:
Life
Numerals
Time
Date
Seconds
Ticking
Smooth
Fluid
Golden
Late
A contest entry
- The Weirdest Contest You'll Ever See by HugsForEveryone.
1250 points, ended December 22, 2008, 13 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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Wow no grammar mistakes at all! Yay you! XD
This was wonderful, before I looked at your author's noted I tried to guess what it was, and I thought it was a watch so I was right
And you chose a very nice word bank.
Wow I am surprised as to how many people are entering with such great ideas!!
Thank you for entering and the best of luck to you!
~Docteh
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