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Unforgivin souls

Maybe if you would have told the truth it
would have been different.
but your lies become of the misunderstood
beauty that stands right in-front of you.
 

SO you began to lie and now look
at the destruction that falls in-front
of you.


dig me under in your lies
you want to ask forgiveness
but i just shun you away.
burn in hell.

I can't forgive someone i can
no longer see...
pull yourself together replace
it with the fake smiles of the
girls that draw life from you.

I guess your too young to understand
and maybe i'm just to blind sometimes
to see the hidden truth..
of your lies..

make me believe with every lie
suck the life  and take control
of the madness that eats
eat away your soul
with the pain and anger
toward you
LET IT EAT YOU ALIVE.

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  • i.s.i.s
    December 7, 2008
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    Filled with dark passion and riveting emotion...great job!


  • Dark TwilightPrince
    December 4, 2008
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    wow

    very dark. but nice ,sering in its own way. i like it!