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97 yr old Gentleman
Loving yet lonely millionaire
In good health apart from weak heart
Seeks attractive & energetic 20’s female
For short term relationship

A contest entry

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  • EmeraldDreams
    December 6, 2008
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    lol! Which woman could possibly refuse such an offer! Great, funny entry.

  • koala
    December 5, 2008
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    You had me at millionaire.


  • tumultuous
    December 5, 2008
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    hahaha!


  • maralisa silver member
    December 5, 2008
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    haha a brilliant take onthe promt good luck inthe contest maralisa


  • Venugopal gold member
    December 4, 2008
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    so humoros, enjoyed


  • KayJay
    December 4, 2008
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    Simply perfect... A wonderfully creative and humorous write...
    Ken

  • Hungry Joe
    December 4, 2008
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    Ha! Get out yer pickaxes, sheilas!

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