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Treed is the one that seed
and treed is the one that sayed
but i am the mannanac
and not the one you seed

Two land's in the Voutian
to land's in the V  C
two lie  T  it is in the fountian
to lie it is to see

Two men that said i am mountian
to men that said im A sea
to land's i said i fountian
to land's i said i see

See i am the magic mountian
and see, i am the magic see
but if you go to the magic mountian
i'll be at the magic see

Tem in el eye's
tem in el see
see i am the magic mountian
say i am the magic see

Call me in the magic mountian any time you see
but if you go to the magic mountian
don't go away from me

And in thee end, i will be thee only one you see.

Author notes

Two time's two is for the way i see, but four time's four is the way i T.

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  • redhanded
    December 4, 2008

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    hmm very different write that is for sho i liked it tho so thanks for entering my contest and best of luck to you in the future and with your writing.
    andi
    (redhanded)