Die, fat bitch, die,
Is what my brain does say,
Hurt, fat bitch, hurt,
So your pain will never go away.
Suffer, fat bitch, suffer,
Starve your self to death,
Take in your final moments,
Take that final breath.
Your disgusting, you are ugly,
Your nothing but worthless shit,
You deserve to be in pain,
In your devistation you must sit.
Your vial, you are sick,
You make the world want to vomit,
You fucking usless prick.
Dont you dare feel sorry for your self,
Feel the worlds unfair,
Because you deserve all the shit you recieve,
You deserve all your dispare.
Your the way you are for a reason,
You were born so wrong and bad,
And for that you must be punished,
Your a stupid slut who makes everyone mad.
You are just a piece of rubbish,
No wait your less than that,
Your like dog shit on a shoe,
In your face you should be spat.
Why are you feeling sorry,
For your pathetic vial self,
No one cares about you,
Nor your presence or your health.
SO stop your crying, you baby,
A pathetic excuse you are,
You are such an inconveniece,
Ha, dont bother wishing on that star.
No one's gonna listen,
Have you not realised that yet,
Are you realy that dumb and stupid,
Anyone who cares about you, have you met?
No no one cares, Cos your not worth caring about,
I am the only one who cares, thats why i scream and shout.
But if you do not listen,
You dumb ass stupid twat,
Then i can not help you,
So stop being such a prat.
Do you understand what i am saying?
I am your only friend,
No one else cares about you,
Im the only one here until the end.
No body does love you,
No one ever would,
Why would anyone want to love you,
So dont feel that they could.
Because they can all see through you,
See the dirty slag you are,
They hate you as much as i do,
Except the keep their honesty so far.
You know that they are lying,
Everytime they say,
'Yes of course we love you'
That it was true i bet you pray!
But it's not, and it never will be,
So get that thought out of your head.
No one will ever love you,
So just listen to me instead.
I am all that matters,
I tell you the truth,
I will make you better,
One day you'll see the proof.
I will make you skinny,
Make you a better person over all,
Im the only one who cares,
The one who will catch you when you fall.
SO go look in the mirror,
See the disgustingness everyone sees,,
Then come back to me and tell me,
I was right and me you are going to please.
Just do as i tell you,
Cut and burn when i tell you too,
And then we will get along fine,
And eventually i'll kill you.
A contest entry
- *♥Self Image♥* by stargazer..
800 points, ended December 31, 2008, 50 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Disorders- bipolar, ADHD, OCD any disorder will do! by StoneGypsy.
422 points, ended January 10, 13 entries
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I hope this doesnt trigger anything for any one. Please leave me a comment, good, bad, what ever you feel, just please be a little sensitive as they are all true stories about my life so farx
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This is very very interesting and insightful. I didn't expect it after the first few lines, but it's beauty built up. -
Do you see what i see?
I see someone asking for help from the people that are around her, but no one there can see what you see. Its just a shame nobody close to you cant open there eyes and look at the pains and suffering that is right in front of there faces. Poetry is a way to get all your anger out and those words, that you can't say aloud, or your too frightened to say, in case they are thrown back into your face. This is a Very Good write.
Simler to the way I wrote a long, long time ago.
I knw you have heard this a million times before but things do get better with time....
You have to prove to the world that your better than any of them. Thank you for letting me read this work. It brings back memorys that I thought were long dead, but I got through it and I know you can too. Keep writing your feelings down in which ever way you can and soon you will realise that you can beat the aseholes at there own games and maybe be come a published Author like me...
Good luck with whatever you do.
Eamon... xx
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WOW... I kind of had to laugh when you said those horrible things, said you were their friend, then back to the horrible words again. Don't get me wrong, I liked this a lot. Poetry is deffinatly a way to get all your anger out and those words that you can't say aloud. Good write.
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painful
hey i'm ana too. i have si problems too. or i did. and this is so realistic. hun i'm sure you'll get better, that you wont die from this. if u ever wanna talk you can message me. other than that, this poem is raw and painful like the disease that inspired it. good job! -
This is a great poem and it shows self loathing very well. I hope your not going through this but if you are Im very sorry. Anyway great poem and good luck in the contest!
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wow...im lost for words,but unfortunatly, not for tears...i know wat its like to hurt not they way u do beacause im not you and i cant pretend and say i know how things affect you,but in my own ways.your poem,although vulgar,harsh and demeaning,reflects true self loathing and pain,and that i understand. you have written a beautifully painful piece,and it has truely touched me,thank you,and no thank you at the same time,i hope you can understand. ez
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great poem! amazing great work! but it made me a little upset... I donno why though.
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TRULLY AMAZINGLY PENNED.....YOU REALLY DESCRIBED SELF DISGUST PERFECTLY...I TOO GO THROUGH BOUTS OF FEELING LOW ANG DESPISE MY SELF..ADMITTEDLY NOT TO THAT EXTENT BUT I CAN SYMPHASIZE...HATING UR SELFI S VERY PAINFUL AND DEPRESSING ...YOU SHOULD TRY TO THINK MORE POSITIVELY AS HARD AS IT MAY SEEM.....AND YOU ARE RIGHT...YOU ARE YOUR WORST CRITIC...AND THE FINAL LINES PUTS IT INTO PERSPECTIVE...
"And eventually i'll kill you."
POWERFUL ENDING .....
GOOD WRITE !!
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good job
Do you know my wife? I liked it except for the kill you part.
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i dont know if i do?! lol. is she going through the same thing as i am? thank you for the comment it means a lot
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..again, i have experienced a version of those feelings-obvo not exactly as they are your own...i'm sorry that you've felt like this...but it is a great piece of work all the same...lots of strong and sympathetic emotion...
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