First Boyfriend

Asked for love, got screwed instead.

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Contest: Humorous 6-word memoir.

6 Word Memoirs by Bean Sidhe. 400 points, ended December 17, 2008, 35 entries
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Make Me Laugh by Pollycheck. 575 points, ended January 3, 53 entries
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By me, right now

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Pollycheck
December 30, 2008

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Thank you for entering my contest. This is short and to the point. It however gave me a good chuckle. It was fun to read.
Yvette Champ
December 5, 2008
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Oh my, a grand slam of wham bam for the poor boy who looked for love and played with a toy, raw with ravishing impact!
- gazecatcher
  December 5, 2008
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  Thank you!
  "Grand slam of wham bam" ...that's awesome.
Bean Sidhe
December 4, 2008

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Indeed. Didn't most first loves turn out that way? Mine personally is "Married forever, but divorced in seven." Nicely done. Thank you for your entry & good luck in the contest.