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Highways and Biways

There are Highways and Bi-ways I have tried
Without hesitation I have been there
some say I am foolish and some say brave
But the elusive satisfaction i still crave
So until then I will put out my thumb and hitch

to another turnoff I travel
What lies beyond that hill..I can never be sure
Yet its mystery and beauty is my drawer
Open up my eyes to new and lesser things
where complication and regret have only wings
Decisions made and left undone

another tomorrow has just begun
And I am on the freeway of life
But there are times when a toll is required
This may mean temporary hardship
But I survive another turnstile of no turning back
Soon I turn down another strange and dusty track

As the campfire of today burns
I wonder what tomorrow will bring
and so beneath the stars of new promise I sleep
and tomorrow new friends or lost ones again I meet
Seems these Highways are never-ending
and the Bi-ways are my spiritual mending

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  • Pure Thought silver member
    December 21, 2008
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    Congratulations on a well written Gold

    I like your flow and progression through the poem and life.

    Buddy


  • LunaAmara
    December 12, 2008

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    I love how you connect each stanza with the last line from the previous. This is great and full of hope. I really enjoyed reading this.


  • Disturbed Prodigy
    December 4, 2008

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    kind of makes you think as you read it, this was a great poem, minding opening some what, keep it flowing and good luck in the contest