Sinking deeper and deeper
into da soil
sometimes that's how i feel
like this world just ain't a place for me
but then i gotta remind myself about my mission
i will not conform to the earth
but i will strengthen my mind
and pass my knowledge on
cuz da kids are the future.
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You are a wise young man, I'm liking your style.
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this made me smile. i have had similar thoughts and have also written about it. i like your style. its quite different compared to what im used to. good write.
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well done and so true . . progress and knowledge will result . .
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powerful words i must say to you bravo. Your words ring so true our children is what makes this world worth living in and they make the world go around with out children there would be no hope and all would be lost .
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you shall not sink for your mission is not complete
you are a soldeir with jah in your heart and that is your strength.
i admire your poetry i hope people who read truely understand your mission -
Your spot on , you have such a great gift of putting your words across perfectly to get you message heard!
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they are and the parents need to help hold them up. kids are the future... i hope their gunna be enough
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Amen honey Amen
Yes you have penned a masterpiece that speaks i volume here I must say Bravo
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