What would be for a moment?
Nothing more than a sorrowful time
Is this more than just a sacrament?
God is not a spirtual crime
I would want to live in a better world
Where a warm smile could be found on everyone
Maybe this is just a fantasy that is just told
But I think our hearts are not so alone
Life is just another place given to us all
A platform for us to improve upon
Maybe one day a person's arms on I will fall
And the care will go on
But until then it will be just a hope for a better world
And I will remain in the presence of God beyond the frigid cold
Author notes
I chose this topic because of soceital observation. And this outward view makes for an original artistic perspective.
A contest entry
- Stun me. by heavenbird.
590 points, ended December 5, 2008, 26 entries
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Very good.
I really enjoyed.
Thanks for writing a new poem, too!
Great work and best of luck!
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