I believe in this day and time,
where families refuses to walk the line.
Feeling they can fix it but what will it cost,
when helping others your family becomes lost.
Do you hear the voice within my son,
where you can see whats needed but its never done.
Time for your world this day to begin,
to find the peace you seek and the destruction to end .
Look beyond your house and tell me what do you see,
could you move out on your own and receive this need.
Could you walk away in order to save yourself,
to gain this knowledge you so crave and self wealth.
We cant change those we love they have to feel the need,
cry out for help even to DR PHYLL if need be.
Wake them up of this destruction they are blind to today ,
and find in this son you shall find the way.
Sometimes we have to leave them to help them see their pain,
sometimes in order for them to wake up they hit bottom again and again.
As long as they have help lifting their worries every day,
the ones so addicted will continue to play.
Talk to you boss and give him the full picture of your life,
let him see how much you want to be away from it all.
and you need his help that's right,
Never sit back and wish get out there and take a hold and fly.
for the future is yours so get out there and make it right.
This is your future you are looking at,
dont stay where you feel they are dragging you down with them.
Find yourself a job and get yourself your own place,
and in turn find you should have ever had to live this way.
Author notes
You will be in my prayers son and if you feel you need more help
then go to your local church and talk to the paster and explain your cituation and
tell him you need help you need a place of refuge to be able
to get yourself back and feel in control again .
A contest entry
- Crucifiction in stone by redhanded.
770 points, ended December 6, 2008, 11 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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very good
second read is best -
very good
too bad he ain't got a family
it's a shame
some get lonely
i like this
it's a really good, good job -
very good
"I believe in this day and time,
where families refuses to walk the line.
Feeling they can fix it but what will it cost,
when helping others your family becomes lost. "
it's so true
wonderful read
some families forget how others in the family helped them get what theywant
then they go and help strangers
excellent
families forget what it is
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aw i loved this piece i could relate to it very much so. thanks so very much for your entry I greatly appreciate it.
best of luck to you in the future and with your writing.
andi
(redhanded)
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