As I look at you and try to remember
I know I've saw you before
But I can't figure where it was
I loved you before
because I feel the power
within in me
Forcing me into an attraction with you
I've dreamed about you
You've seen me I'm sure
Your looking the same way
Come to me my love
We must meet again.
A contest entry
- NOT THE TRADITIONAL I MISS YOU ... CHECK IT OUT!!! by righteousme.
1400 points, ended December 18, 2008, 12 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
If i stink don't be afraid to tell me.
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Lovely write
I feel the same way come to me and I shall treat you as my loving family indeed for our blodd is the same we dream we love and we show joy together we can make life complete
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I love the "We must meet again" part, as you bring a supposed stranger that you know you've known before into your heart. A great write.
Well penned,
~lost
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I like the theme of remembrance ... nice images.
unless it is intentional, check the grammar.
thanks and good luck in the contest.
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Like the command taken in this piece. Strong write, good luck.
♥
whisper
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meeting again. thank you so much for your time and talent in this contest ...
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this is something strong, i kind of have that feeling with someone i haven't even met, but it may not be the say, keep it flowing and i am a honest person i will tell you this don't stink
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