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Nocturnal Visions

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Nocturnal dreams call to me -

I know not from where, spellbound;

I follow shrouded, misty visions,

Enraptured by the haunting sound.

 

All about me swell the waves -

This moonlit night, unbound;

I feel a sense of wonderment

At the hopefulness I’ve found.

 

 

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Sometimes hope is all there is to hold onto in this raging sea of life. So, I hope...

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  • Reptile Lady gold member
    December 8, 2008

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    A wonderful poem
    Deeply written
    Thank you for your entry and best wishes
    Julie


  • Disturbed Prodigy
    December 4, 2008

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    i like this poem that you have done here, i mean that you have a great pen there, i kind of feel something strong when i read this, keep it flowing and good luck in the contest. took me some where with this poem.


  • Paloszoo gold member
    December 4, 2008

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    I follow shrouded, misty visions,
    Enraptured by the haunting sound.

    I love those lines!! This piece is just stunning. Fantasic job on the prompt, my friend! Just beautiful!


  • arafura gold member
    December 4, 2008

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    This is very good. I like the sense of hope in a better tomorrow. The rhyme and flow are great, as is the imagery. Excellent!

  • SoulWhispher
    December 4, 2008

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    One always needs to hang onto to hope in the raging sea of life, this is a true measure of that statement, you have done and outstanding take on Option 1, great job Cyn, blessings peace and love John

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