Time and time you cross my mind,
it takes my breath and stills my heart.
Memories of your parting words,
the reasons we should part.
I’ve never known such sadness,
and hope I never do again.
I try to lift the loneliness,
with thoughts “of might have been.”
No matter of the years gone by,
nor of how many years to come.
When I think of me and you,
I was the lucky one.
P.N.
Author notes
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A contest entry
- Eternal Love (Quote Prompt) by Sandygram.
1200 points, ended December 6, 2008, 18 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Sadness Pulls
at the heart as I read your offering. Words escape me. Best of Luck!
Respectfully,
Silent Hawk
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Thank you girls. Your so good to me.
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beautiful. Once again, an exceptional write from you and your piece fitted perfectly with the prompt. It seemed to be a little sad but i think the last two lines said something different. There are no changes i can see to be made here. Well done indeed.
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A lovely poem you have penned. Love can be happy and said at the same time.Thank you for entering our contest. This was a pleasure to read this afternoon. Best of luck to you. Take care, Sandy
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Great!!
A sad and beautiful write.
A good take on the word prompt, well done.
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This is so beautifully written, and relates very well to the quote prompt. Sad, but romantic feeling. Great write, and my best to you in the contest. Blessings, Patty "mite" Should be "might"
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haha your right. I changed it , thanks..
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A wonderful write from you here and I enjoyed the read! Good luck in the contest hon
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