If this were not anonymous
I would not take the risk
so truly what are the odds
of you ever reading this?
So I'll begin from the top
your eyes melt me in flight
I can't erase those thoughts
I have of you on every night.
Your lips glow like bright lit coals
harnessing my dreams of 'the' kiss
I strum along to your sensuality
like musical notes on keyboard bliss.
Amazing how one can dissipate
at the sight of arms so sleek
like muscular mountains of bronz
I can only really stand one peek.
You shatter/blast all my concoctional
imaginings just the way you walk by
just like a tall, tall girraff I slide/glide
proportionately to the waiting sky...
as that is where you tend to send me;
each & everytime I think "I'm better now"
with your smile/charm and much more
I get another whiff; then I wonder how?
Author notes
Do you have a crush on someone? Are you keeping it to yourself?
Feel free to continue doing so - but here is your opportunity to write that special secret someone a poem and tell them how you feel.
In a list
A contest entry
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Comments
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Awwh, this was really sweet -
I'm sure we can ALL think of times in our lives when we've felt the same way about someone - and you really caught the theme of having a crush
this was so cute, bigtime - really brought back some memories for me!
thanks for entering
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Ah, from whence cometh this poem of love and all strange things? I do not know but I shall eventually discover the secrets of it.
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Has me wanting to try to guess who this is alright, so I can't tell on you...LOL I wonder how much trouble I would be in if I wrote about M.W.S. if you only knew who that is...LOL Blessings, enjoyed this guessing game.
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This is stunning
I do think that you should have "begin" instead of "began" in the first line of the second stanza, but that is the only thing that I would change - this has such an enchanting feel to it! I really like the ending - and this is a beautiful take on the prompt
♦ M
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Thank you so much also for the correction, it was most appreciated, I write fast and well, this happens when one chooses to do so lol
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Wow, thank you so much for this captivating review...thanks for the smilelol
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This is great! Quite sensual and also soft and dreamy if that makes sense? A beautiful write.
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Some men are just dreamy, point blank, and when they smile at you your whole sky turns up a notch...but, I am beginning to break out my SunShades hahahaha perhaps this will help to avert some of his 'glow' hahahaha let's hope lol and thanks for your elegant, smooth commentary - I appreciate lol
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woo...you got it bad! ...lol. great write! I can really relate to this
good luck
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You think? hahaha all it takes is one great guy, with loads of charms, and something special in his eyes and must I go on and on hahaha he's a great person across the board and well I am attracted but I am learning a woman's secret that she can't let him know, right, hence, this approach to get it all out and relax hhahaha its not working thoughlol
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Made me smile. Lord knows I need one. Loved the poem! and the title *S*
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If one smile I can help to form, then my day is made as well lol and thank you for your review
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