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You'll never see

I watch you when you do not know
but it's only because I love you so
there is no tie
between you and I
that you can plainly see
but you belong to me
in my world thats how it is
and you are my shining prince
and now you cannot even
pass a glimpse like I have given
you wonder if I exist
and here i am, we co-exist
if that is not enough for you
than take this token I will pursue
the one I crush on is amazing
you know him as an unchanging
witness to your humble crime
of stealing him from out behind
my back
I'm slack
on fighting you for him
as tears fight to the brim
and I stand tall
and face it all
with eyes that only see
the beauty of my crush
and me.

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  • Maylette
    December 9, 2008

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    This is an interesting poem - I can feel the emotions that you are expressing and I think you chose a good way to do it the first two lines were my favorite!

    ♦ M