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A Prayer from an Innocent Angel

Dear Papa God,

I wish tonight i could meet Santa Claus
I will just give him my socks,
Tell him to put some bread,
for my little sister Cristy
Tell him to put some medicines,
for my sick Daddy,
Tell him to put some laundry soaps
for my hardworking mom,
and lastly,
tell Santa to spare toys for my playmates
who are homeless
and sick like me.
Papa God,
I wish this Christmas,
I could hug and kiss them all
and greet you a happy birthday!
before i sleep forever...

I know am invited for your birthday Papa God.
Please wait for me in heaven...

Amen.

Author notes

merry Christmas everyone, wish you all the best christmas . unlike mine, so pale with only black and white colors...

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  • sense surreal gold member
    December 9, 2008

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    heart tugging this is, and pristine
    how she knows about the concept of death as sleep

    Nice to see you writing back
    sana bigyan ako ng papa ni papa God
    de loko lang


    • ishelicious
      December 11, 2008
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      hehe thanks sa comment high falutin words hehe nosebleed na naman ah hmmmm madalang na lang ako magsulat dito busy kasi sa skul eh huhuhu


  • Samplette gold member
    December 4, 2008
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    A lovely entry, thank you for sharing in the contest.
    Sam


  • Horcrux.Breathing
    December 4, 2008
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    awh thats so sad and sweet i love the innocent generous charicter you have created x