Perfection;
In the form of two bodies merging together,
Fitting together flawlessly,
Filling hollowness and making things complete.
The shifting weight in perfect balance,
Not awkward,
But accordingly familiar
And still so compelling,
Once never seems enough.
Aching to catch your breath,
But not enough to hinder the motions.
A toe-curling rollercoaster,
Such a pleasurable ride,
Every turn so exciting,
While you anticipate the peak.
A slow and steady rhythm occurring
While tongues dance and lips collide
Up and over the hill, you’re falling
Crashing into satisfying warmth
Please tell me what you think
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Enjoyed this very much, sexy with lovely language, very nice, very nice. Geo
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beautiful,
your poems are wonderful (: -
This was a really sexy write. It describes an encounter of passionate senuality, without cheapening it.
This really was 'perfection'.
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Mmm...
It was beautiful. Honestly, if I wrote one like this, it would come out to tense, crazy and angry. I love this write. <3 -
Wow~
Now this is soft, sensual and sweet Journey to take the reader~
Beautifully painted in words that could be felt
Bravo!! Love it
Excellent write and I so Appreciate Your visit to my work 
Keep that quill dancing~
Thank You for sharing Your Heart and Spirit~
Many blessings to You Sweet Soul
Best wishes too
with much love & light~ Desire~*~
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I hear that..
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ok, ok, you have my attention, now what? this was exciting to read and think about while reading. mind still wanders. lol.
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I concur completely with everything Amera says (below).
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Wow! This is erotic, passionate and penned with class. You are an amazing poet.
Love,
Amera♥
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agreed...sexual in a classy way...its easy to just go for smutty shortcut...but this one takes the long way
good work.
one thing i can't resist is the word 'crash' used in a positive way...its a beautiful word.
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a poem about passionate sex written beautifully carefuly and not sounding vulgar in any way. a very good write x
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Thank you!
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