So close
but kept so far away
by boundaries
that will break some day.
The question
still remains in mind
but I'll wait
until you're mine
I'll never know
what's planned in fate
but I count the days,
you're worth the wait.
A contest entry
- Shh - Don't tell anyone by Suzanne Dia.
3500 points, ended January 5, 28 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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This is a lovely crush poem
I really like te rhyme and the last line is beautiful! The background is sweet as well - the whole thing worked together to make me smile!
♦ M
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Wow, it's a wonderful feeling to know that someone would wait a lifetime for you. Great thought here and good luck!
Jeremy0826 -
Succinct and rhymed well...
this is a treat in brevity.
Blue
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aww..this is good! and i LOVE your background
nice rhyme btw...very nice ...gives your poem a nice flow
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Really good..good luck to you!
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Lovely poem- I like short, light poetry like this once in a while.
Good luck in contest and hope you catch the object of your desire one day!
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