rub a dub dub,
two boys in a tub,
remove the grime,
ecstacy sublime,
gyrate,
down against the marble plate,
crave the skin,
deep down within.
upstairs upon the bed,
submissive boy uses his head,
back and forth,
gimmie more,
gyrate,
make me love to hate,
crave the sin,
deep down within.
A contest entry
- Seductive Max 50 words 20 poets not a PIF by Unconscious-Energy.
1200 points, ended December 11, 2008, 13 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
love the darkness, breathe the cataclysmic self indulgence
Comments
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Thank you for your entry, fun read...
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wow, nice write. I love the imagry, I mean I feel like I was watching you or something. It was very sensual and erotic without the blateness of pornogrophy. I thought you did an amazing job on this!!
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I like this! It's fun, not to mention so damn yummy. lol
Great Job!!!
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