Stuck between a rock in a hard place
That is where I am
Pushing and squirming against you
And the other problems that hold me in place
Why for even a second can you not let me go?
Time and time again you have hung me out to dry
Left me beaten and battered for all to see and enjoy
Do you not see that this pain and torture is not pleasurable?
The weight of everything is slowly crushing me
The pain is like nails being driven in to my flesh
All I want is for you to stop
To leave me alone
But you will not leave
Not until I am hung up
Nailed in place
And completely at your mercy
The sounds of my begging and pleading filling the air
Until at long last I have stilled
and I am no long caught between that rock and a hard place
A contest entry
- Crucifiction in stone by redhanded.
770 points, ended December 6, 2008, 11 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please dont be afraid to tell me what you really think
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man this sucks it won't let me post 3 applause this is the first time I have been on AP in forever. but here lets see if this works.
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woops seems I forgot your applause sorry there hun. good job! can't wait to see more.
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I love this piece. I know what it is like to feel like you are basically "pinned" down and unable to do anything kind of like my ex girlfriend she wanted me to never be happy and so on and so forth and lied and it was just so much drama it was not even funny and I felt that there was nothing I could do about it. great write though I can really relate to this.
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hmm i loved the imagry in this piece and the over all flow. great write. n best of luck in the contest babe.
I love you =]
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grrr you werent supposed to know it was me >.< lol I love you too
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dang another good one keep up the good work
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