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Broken and tattered at times,
but never reaching the end of my rope.
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Author notes
picture by ~ By: Nahoj Sennah
A contest entry
- 13 fantastic words of poetry by Lavender Butterfly.
550 points, ended December 5, 2008, 20 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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S much wisdom..and somuch depth in the struggle you have shown..love it..and very much well taken philosophy is here..well done..
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never reach the end of our rope
That says a lot. we often feel that the rope is running out.... But with Gods on our side we He'll catch us if we do.
Great Job.
*Go with God* my friend,
Valerie
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Had to come back to see how you faired in the contest and was pleased to see you won the gold~
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Well eared Gold. This short poem has so much meaning and feelings they exceed the amount shown in any long one.
Congrates.
~Noor
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very well personified.... x
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Only you could personify this picture, giving it such a strength. You're good girl!!
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woops! forgot these guys!!
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ah, I love this! Wonderful take on the prompt! very inspiring
good luck
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I like this piece very well done. My best wishes.
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a nice take on the prompt . . good luck in the contest !!
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Pam,
This is so reflective on how life really is. We are broken and tattered.. but we keep going.. thanks to the Grace of God and the will He has given us.
A beautiful 13 words.
Criss
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