I loved you then
but now you have changed
What was is little more than a memory
I tried to love you now
but who you have become
isnt who you were
The girl I fell for was caring, sweet, kind
You now are just cheater and a liar
What happened to the girl I knew?
What happened to the love that once was?
I now know that it can never be again
nor do I want it to be what it was.
You have moved on
It has been long and painful
but I to have moved on
We both have someone new
It is a new love
but it will never be like first love
Author notes
The insperation for this piece was a conversation that my ex gf and I had about an upcoming trip she has back home. She was my first love & her parents not being happy about it ripped us apart & now that she's finally back in my life I really don't like who she has become.
A contest entry
- Stun me. by heavenbird.
590 points, ended December 5, 2008, 26 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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very good write you have here love I enhoyed the flow of the piece and it is very desciptive. I love you sooo very much xoxo
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so I take it this is the situation you were talking about? just taking a wild stab may be I am wrong. correct me if I am. but other than that this is a very well put together piece and I enjoyed it very much. keep penning! helps to ease the ache a bit at times I just recently started exploring this site since I have had one since like 2 years ago, I am begining to enjoy what I see.
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Aww, this is really sad.
I'm very sorry this happened to you.
You're the first person that's actually seemed to have READ my rules and such, because I see your AP filled with notes that I asked you to write, and no one else's is. D:
Good work, I'm also impressed that you wrote a new poem.
Good luck!
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wow this is really powerful
i can relate 2 it so much
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