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Orange

The orange is handled
In the bowl with care.
The dead blossom
Marks a place of
New beginnings.
Its bumpy outer layer
Is rough and ripe.
The strong, juicy taste
Is sweet on my tongue.
I put it back in the bowl -
Until next time.

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I wrote this in school randomly.

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  • Sky Prince Ireland gold member
    December 4, 2008

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    Maybe you wrote this randomly but you sure did a good job. I love oranges. Thanks for sharing; I love this. Gives me the taste for an orange.
    Brian