Little red robin
sat in the snow
his little red feathers
attracted a crow
Hey Robin, the crow said
aren't you too small
to be out here playing
But Robin said Not at all
I'm big enough,
I truly am
I'm not such a wussy
like Mary's little lamb
Oh well, said the crow
I guess you know best
little Robin nodded
put forward his chest
But all of a sudden
some snow from a tree
fell from above
and little red Robin
fastly flew back
to his mama's love
A contest entry
- Winter Bird ( picture prompt ) by White Tiger 96.
350 points, ended December 4, 2008, 13 entries
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Comments
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Woot woot
Really cute. It flowed gracefully and the rhyming was well thought. One thing was that you did not use any quotation marks when the birds were talking but it was still easy to read. Good poem and keep writing.
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great job!! This is a very sweet write. You rhymed the story wonderfully. thank-you for entering my contest!! Keep Writing!! I look forward to reading more from you!!!
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Great written poem about the little red robin
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