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Little Buggy

Little buggy sitting there
Watching the rain without no care

sing a song to pass the time
or hum a tune that doesn't rhyme.

You can do whatever you please
Like watching the rain while at ease.

okay, this is funny, i was watching sponge bob last night and it was raining. then i seen a ladybug fly by the window and i wrote this poem.

    I plan to revise this poem: please leave constructive criticism!
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  • Sharon Marie gold member
    July 10

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    Sweet

    So cute ! adorable poem that just hugs you. pleasant and humorious again.


    Blessing and looking forward to seeing more of your poems to come .keep them flowing!

    Blessing again!
    Sharon


  • Demetria
    February 1
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    Hehehe.

    I like it. Its amusing. Congratulations you did great!


  • Sai Amartya
    December 4, 2008

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    Sponge Bob and Rain?

    Wow you had an interesting night without me, Twin. Anyways. It hilarious. I it.


  • Rocker Dad
    December 4, 2008
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    Lmao.


    brilliant! I love it.