grounded_
by a sea …weary
no fish left-
for my nets,
of hope
Author notes
picture inspired;
http://allpoetry.com/images/ext/Item/4833/831.jpg?1228385675
picture by ~ By: Nahoj Sennah
A contest entry
- 13 fantastic words of poetry by Lavender Butterfly.
550 points, ended December 5, 2008, 20 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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excellent Mal
this is golden dude
always love when brevity holds so much meaning
and the title adds so much as well
kickin' bro
peace Muddy
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Oh my! Did you ever paint the picture well dear poet! This is wonderful. I love brevity. Mountains spilled over here with so few words. I wish you well in the challenge.
Much Love ♥
Renee
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Aw, this drips evocative image and I am suddenly wanting to be a school of fish to provide what's needed.
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Love your metaphoric empty of life's bounty seas.It provides readers with the futility of asperations in wanting what just isn't there to be had. Nice work.
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so beautifully drawn
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Beautiful write. I liked the ending. Very metaphorical. Makes a person think of life and of how hopeless life can seem sometimes. Thanks for sharing and keep that pen flowing.
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"my nets of hope" ah, love your metaphor
good luck
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Ah so very true, well done. My best wishes.
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thanks karl
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Liked this short few lines, a great interpretation of the picture prompt in this contests. Great ending.
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