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A Sign




Looking out at the frostbitten horizon
A single life
Swaying
Gives me hope





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  • HatedLoveDieingRose
    December 12, 2008
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    amazing!!!


  • Lavender Butterfly silver member
    December 5, 2008
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    beautiful... x


  • Maylette
    December 4, 2008

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    This is a beautiful take on the prompt - I really like the positive spin that you have placed on the picture I really like how you used the word frostbitten too - I love that word!

    ♦ M

  • strangerforeigner
    December 4, 2008
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    Well done.


  • Alyzeh
    December 4, 2008

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    Another beautiful take on the prompt! I love how everyone came up with something different, I've read all entries they are all stunning so is this one! Excellent write

    Good luck in the contest.

    Love
    Alyzeh

  • HatedLoveDieingRose
    December 4, 2008
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    beautifully said

    this poem is very very inspiring.. i love it!


  • Topaze
    December 4, 2008
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    Lovely view, well done. My best wishes.


  • Catie Sheeran gold member
    December 4, 2008

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    aw..this is cute and inspiring

    grea take on the prompt

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