Christ's Crucifixion is a Memory.
Of how he loved us
And the sacrifices he made
Taking on the sins of the world.
however,
We too can carve our own story...
In stone by the choices we make.
Will we be remembered like Christ?
or
Forgotten and lost in the Sands of time.
His Footprints are larger
but
We too can leave them as a legacy.
It's not the size of prints
but
The thoughtfulness of giving that counts.
So
Lift up your heart.
Give your love to others freely as he did
and
The doors of opportunity will never close
perhaps,
He'll carve a place for you in Heaven...
To sit with Him and friends
When you have passed on.
dragonheart1
A contest entry
- Crucifiction in stone by redhanded.
770 points, ended December 6, 2008, 11 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What story are you carving in stone?
Comments
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THis is absolutely beautiful how you wrote this to go along with the picture. I don't think anyone could have done it any better. Just perfect.
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aw I love the message displayed here. thanks so much for your entry it was very encouraging.
bst of luck to you in this contst and in the future..
andi
(redhanded) -
aw wow a very brilliant poem my favourite lines give your love to others freely as he did and the door of oppertunity will never close perhaps good luck inthe contest
maralisa
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Wonderful!You're brilliant as is your poetry!Love every word of every line!Nice artwork too!It's just perfect!
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