A low incoherent wail,
hides behind
a deceptive veil.
Soon the truth
will prevail …
When the curtain,
gets ripped at the seams.
The truth
Will be laid bare,
Everyone,
Will talk and stare.
The best you can do …
Is not care,
because you’ll soon
be yesterdays news…
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I was never a fan of poems thats rythmed,
But you did it very smoothly with a quick, but lovely poem
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thank you
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Great write about life and love the yesterdays news connection , very clever.
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Wow this is awesome. seems to explain life pretty well lol, but yeah, I really like the last verse. One question though, did you mean to have a space in between do and ...? the same with prevail. I just noticed you had a space on thos two and not on news so I was just wondering if you did that on purpose or not. Other than that I can't find anything else. good job.
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yes and thank you, i did it to place emphisis at those points, i realise i didn't have to do it, but thanks for poiting that out, i will consider that when i read this out, if i ever do, thanks for the great comment its a pleassure to me to know my words are out there and people like yourself are reading them
Take care
John
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So true... the best you can do is not to care... to heck with the rest of the people! The hype fades all too soon to actually be a matter of worry.
You know, there's a song in spanish with a similar title, ''Periodico de Ayer'' (Yesterday's Newspaper). But the singer talks about a woman. -
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thank you for reading my poem and leaving such a thoughtful comment, i like the title of that song it says a lot, take care
John
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Neat title. Maybe stair/stare? Good advice! I'd like to hear this sung, it lends itself to a lyrical platform.
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thank you and thanks for poiting out the spelling error, i always do that
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