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lost island

Cold spray  on a windy day
I feel drenched
Was it love in this tropical island
or a dream never meant to share

 

Lost in time

moon light fails 

its stillness 

if only I cried

 

Dark moods follow 

you laughed in my face

was it really that funny

that you cheated

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  • Reptile Lady gold member
    December 8, 2008

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    Aw a sad piece you have created
    Deep in the heart it came
    Thank you for your entry and best wishes
    Julie