Another birthday here without you,
now I’m loosing my memory too,
time we use to spend together,
on the ways you loved me true,
‘nother cocktail as I’m missing you!
Author notes
Prompt: "Cocktails for two"
Acrostic
Anton Bellingan
* 5 December 1971 - + 26 September 2004
I'll drink on you tonight! Happy birthday my love!
A contest entry
- Cocktails for Two by cricketjeff.
850 points, ended December 7, 2008, 16 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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A little drink of rembrance to forget how it once was...I can understand that! We all carry these memories and I guess what we want more than a return to them, is to have them again with the right person. Well, that was me anyway, how I viewed it.
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So sad, you should have been enjoying them together!
A glass to you in memory
A drink we used to share
A line or two of poetry
A tear that shows I care
A little slice of might have beens
A love that's still inside
A glimpse at what it all means
A face you cannot hide
Beautifully written and thoughtful.
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My heart weighs heavy for both you and Aneka. My prayers are with you. Please know that he is with my Tim saving a place for you in heaven.
Love,
Amera♥
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Thank you so much!!! I believe they are!!
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excellent
My friend you made this look completely effortless, and I for one am impressed! lots of luck to you in the contest..
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Thank you for your lovely comment
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