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You've Won

You cannot break
what is not whole

So me there is need to console.....

You cannot shatter
a lifeless soul

there is nothing inside except a big black hole....

You can never return
what you stole

well you won if this was all your goal

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  • StarOfDreams23
    December 6, 2008
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    I been here before, I like this and great job!!!!!!!!!

  • Poetryintheblood gold member
    December 5, 2008
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    I've been here before so know the feeling, you've expressed this well, love Jo xoxo

  • MysteriousStrangerX
    December 4, 2008

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    awww wow...this had a big impact on me because i can relate to this very much...

    thankyou for writing this

    you should be proud of it as the imagery and the flow...all flawless