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End of an era.

My soul,
it goes asunder.
I sit at the shore,
watching storm and thunder.

Thrashing waves blackened clouds,
they fuel me as I ponder.
Ponder on that which is nevermore,
gone is joy and gone is wonder.

Tropical sights give me no solace,
coral nor palms and sand.
Devoid of emotion and rest,
I turn and go towards the land.

The sea,
she gave no absolution.
Empty am I,
after the dissolution.

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  • Reptile Lady gold member
    December 8, 2008

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    Wonderful poem
    that feeling felt is strongly written
    Thank you and best wishes
    Julie