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Not a thing
You you you
Some meaningful event
    from the distant past

A reference to Frasier
A fine glass of Scotch
Nothing at all
    And more of the same

Empty, comfortable
Dark and open
Warm and happy
Secluded and free

As big as a peanut
Tiny as a tanker
Noxious as a flower
And it duplicates to boot

Only as far
As it reaches
Until it reaches
No more

A contest entry

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  • XXPrettyLittleSinXx
    December 11, 2008

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    pretty good.

    Decieded to read your poetry, and I;m not dissapointed. I like the poetry, and its fairly different from what i mainly read!Big kudos!


  • heavenbird gold member
    December 4, 2008
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    This is a good write, I enjoyed reading.
    =]
    Good luck!