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I Don't Deserve You

 

 

I know that I was dead wrong

for saying the things that I said 

 

I am hoping that you will understand

and one day let me make it up to you

 

I don't deserve you but, wish you well

I apologize for breaking your heart

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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  • Manda Kathryn Greeters member
    December 14, 2008

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    The longing to be able to apologize is a beautiful sentiment, and you have brought it to life well in this piece

    ♥
    Thank You for Your Entry & Best of Luck
    Stay safe
    ~Manda


  • Mykeee
    December 5, 2008

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    Very well done. Nice simple heart felt apology. Sincere and simple. No boasting or flowery sentences. just sincerity. - Mykeee


  • Disturbed Prodigy
    December 4, 2008

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    there is nothing worth to a lover scorned when love is torn, this poem kind of reminds my of my ex, the only one i am still in contact with, keep it flowing


  • Swangrnv gold member
    December 4, 2008

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    this was a bit..

    sad, and it was also a heartfelt apology to one who you've wronged and have taken the first step in attempting to repair the damage done..well done my friend.